Update 2:
This was a tough one, but I think I’ve managed to cut out the Jawas and leave the Mudhorn scene in. Seems to work pretty well.
The only addition I need to make it to add a sigh and possibly a short sentence of frustration from the Mando when he reaches the Mudhorn cave.
I’m also considering re-scoring the Mudhorn scene, and possibly adding a version of the force theme at the end of the scene. But that is for the final touches.
Here’s the vimeo clip of segment 2. It basically cuts the second episode down to 12 minutes and means that Mando returns to Navarro to deliver the asset at the 39 minute mark, which puts me on track to complete the first act at the one hour mark.
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Changes Made:
- Trandoshan fight scene completely cut.
- All Jawa scenes completely cut.
- Opening Mando walking scene cuts straight into Mando walking into the valley where the mudhorn lives.
- Scene of the Mando reparing himself and his armour moved so the it follows the mud horn scene.
- The 2 wide-angled Mando walking scenes combined into one.
- Scene of Mando returning to Kuill’s camp retained, but dialogue is replaced by the Mando-Kuill discussion about the child’s force lift.
- Kuill camp scene cuts to Kuill-Mando farewell scene on the Razorcrest.
- Added light speed jump to Mando’s exit from Arvala.
- Added in Kuill repairing IG scene from episode 7. Removed Kuill voiceover and inserted required sound effects.
- IG Repair scene cuts to Mando exiting hyperspace at Navarro.
That is (hopefully) the toughest of the 6 segments. 2 down and 4 to go… the third segment has very few edits, so I should have another update in the next week.
Feedback would be greatly appreciated.