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Post #1345866

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specialk2121
Parent topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
16-May-2020, 9:45 PM

Hal 9000 said:

Here’s the current state of the crawl. The first sentence is temporary and needs something more inspired. And the second paragraph needs another clause. Not sure if “rumored” could be replaced with something like “stashed.”

Maybe say “hidden imperial fleet” or “forgotten imperial fleet”

¯\(ツ)