I thought some of your changes were excellent, they even inspired some of my edits.
Wow! That’s pretty encouraging to hear. Thank You!
How close are you to finishing your edit?
At the moment I’m working out the structure of the plot. I’m really still in the brainstorming phase, figuring out the right structure for the first act, which really is the trickiest part of the film. I’m experimenting with different ideas
though.
I’ve decided to completely redesign an opening scene between Leia & Luke to slow the pacing down. Here’s a small list of what I’ve done so far.