I was inspired by this short film,
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FRbbvsxXaBs&t=304s
I got that vibe from the first frame, Jonh. I’d like for this to become live action cannon. Loved the addition of this story and they did a great job on the voices.
Have you played around with softer shadows on the last closeup of your segment? Could be my screen but Lukes features look a little harsh. It has a great feel to it though.