Awesome work! One thing doesn’t sit quiiiite right to me personally is Padme so readily agreeing with Anakin’s statement that she’s there to help kill him. So what if Anakin says “you brought him here to-” and Pabme cuts him off with “Because of what you’ve done”? Or just have “You’re with him! You brought him here!” as a complete statement, to which Padme responds.
Post #1345401
- Author
- Cadavra
- Parent topic
- Revenge of the Sith (The New Canon Cut) [ON HOLD INDEFINITELY]
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1345401/action/topic#1345401
- Date created
- 15-May-2020, 6:06 PM