Sorted opinions

Color Corrections
I love most, my favorite change remains the brighter greens for the Endor forest, makes it look much more lively.
The interiors of the Endor bunker could have more of a grey palette to match the Death Star.
I agree the X-Wing engines would look better with a pink color to resemble Rogue One.
The Endor shots from space are gorgeous. The space battle is much more visually striking now, with less of a
2D feeling for some of the backgrounds and surroundings in the original.
The added lightsiber glow in the test video looks fine, if a bit static (in the sense it doesn’t change positions when Vader moves, for example).

Shuttle Tydirium
The sun and the illumination look a lot more natural than in other versions, great job!
Maybe this issue is already present in the original film, but the scenes in the interior of the Tydirium seem to lack a bit of background sound ambience. Same with the scene after they land in Endor. Is that a result of isolating the dialogue?
I like the use of Padmé’s Ruminations but I think the build up to it could be a bit subtler. I was wondering if a small piece of that synthwave-sounding score from the penultimate episode of Clone Wars could serve as a bridge between the previous score and Padmé’s Ruminations, namely the bit where Vader first approaches Admiral Piett.