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Movies Remastered
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Star Wars Episode IX: The Last Hope (Help Wanted Finishing This Edit) (WIP)
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13-May-2020, 8:21 AM

I’m almost a year in on this project and it’s going amazingly but I’m stuck on a few smaller scenes until I teach myself more After Effect skills. Is anyone up for helping me finish my version of The Rise of Skywalker? aka The Last Hope

I’m making around 1250 changes and the story, pacing, and overall running of the film. I’ve finished the rough cut but I’m looking for any huge fans with any spare time and after effects skills that could help me finished several small scenes. Here are some of the changes so far…

TEASER TRAILER HERE: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wlKAw0HppYU
NEW FULL TRAILER HERE: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jQnXhZnsIpg

Changes include:

● Add Star Destroyers in the distant sky for multiple-planet shots for Palpatine’s galaxy message.
● Remove Kylos and Ship crash from the desert clip.
● Content fill chrome moving ship from Coruscant scene.
● Add Exagol planet to TLJ Kylo deleted scene.
● Remove Kylos scar.
● Colour correct Clone tanks to green & remove Vaders shadow from the footage.
● Content filling smoke out of the scene.
● Switching broken ship with X-wing image.
● Turning Poes grey shirt to orange.
● Palpatine ultimate power red lightning colour change.
● Add Dagger to Rey’s hand to fix continuety error.
● Finish Saber Crackling [is Kewlfish ok?]
● Add Lando to Leia’s death scene. [Has anyone heard from Jonh?]

You can see some of my work at http://www.youtube.com/moviesremastered

If anyone has any spare time and would like to help please let me know. Any help will be listed in the credits and links/shout outs/co-ops will be added to my channel if you’d wish.

Thanks!

UPDATE May 16 2020:

Star Wars Episode IX: The Last Hope

New Opening:

New Opening crawl (No mention of Palpatine) - Does anyone have a template?
☑ Remove Kylo Ren on Mustafa
☑ Remove Kylo going to Exagol
☑ Insert Kylo flashback scene (Dominic edit revised)
☑ Insert Kylo Ren fixing mask scene

New Leia & Luke Scene:

☑ Insert Nasa blue planet clip
☑ Add Rey meditation scene
☑ Create a new scene with Leia talking to Luke about Reys training
☑ Cut to Luke from TLJ night scene
☑ Insert Lukes death scene from TLJ (switch day to night fx)
☑ Insert Leia dropping headphones and sorrow for Kylo scene

Falcon Message:

☑ Cut Klaud burp
☑ Cut Poe saying “Sorry!, I’m sorry!”
☑ Remove Klaud from the background
☑ Cut Finn saying “Oooh!”
☑ Delete Klaud falling
☑ Cut oncoming Tie Fighters
☑ Cut after Falcon jumps to like speed.
☑ Remove head-on Tie Fighters
☑ Remove lightspeed skipping scene

Forest Scene:

☑ Add new natural history Jungle footage
☑ Insert Rey meditation
☑ Cut Reys tantrum
☑ Cut Reys wirework roll
☑ Cut Rey saying “To hear the voices of the Jedi…"
☑ Restructure talk with Leia & Rey to seem more respectful
☑ Add Crackling Saber effect throughout (WIP)
☑ Remove Rey cutting down so many trees
☑ Delete BB8 Under tree clip

Rey & Leia in bunker scene:

☑ Remove Rey saying “I will earn you brothers Saber”
☑ Add BB8 clip from cave to cover Rey handing Leia Saber Thanks idir_hh for continuity error mention

Falcon Back:

☑ Add Falcon returning from TFA
☑ Remove entire Poe, Rey & Finn “Banter scene”
☑ Cut straight to Poe giving the message
☑ Remove Poe saying “Pulling the strings”
☑ Remove Leia Saying “Always from the shadows”
☑ Cut Poe saying “16 hours…”

Kylo Ren Return:

☑ Remove Stormtroopers saying “Knights of Ren…"
☑ Remove all mention of Sith Fleet or deal
☑ Remove “Harvest more of the galaxies young.

Mustafa Scene:
☑ Add New Tie Fighter establishing shot of Mustafar
☑ Add New Tie Pilot scene

☑ Add New pan shot on Mustafa (Thanks Kewlfish)
☑ Add battlefront II scene (Lilian edit revised)
☑ Recolour Blue Gun Blasts yellow.
☑ Insert Kylo Killing people on Mustafa
☑ Add Palpatine saying “Good”

Exagol:

☑ Continue with Exagol scene
☑ Remove Saber lens flair
☑ Cut Palpatine saying “Every voice inside your head”
☑ Cut Palpatine saying “Kill the girl”
☑ Lengthen Ship pan shot
☑ Cut weird transition pause before Falcon

Falcon desert planet:

☑ Remove Finn Saying “That’s lucky”
☑ Remove C3PO joke
☑ Cut Finn saying “I’ve never seen so few Wayfinders”
☑ Insert BB8 scene from TFA
☑ Remove Rey saying “Excellent name”
☑ Delete Bead analysis dialog
☑ Cut Lando scene
☑ Cut Finn saying “How do you know how to do that?”
☑ Cut all of “They fly now!” dialog
☑ Cut Poe saying “Did we lose them?”
☑ Cut Finn saying “I think so”
☑ Cut C3PO saying “Excellent job Sir!”
☑ Cut cheers after killing Stormtrooper
☑ Cut Rey saying “Ochi’s ship”
☑ Remove Stormtrooper flying death
☑ Delete cartoon Stormtrooper death
☑ Speed up sinking sand scene so Rey has no time to use the force.
☑ Cut C3PO saying “when will this agony end”
☑ Cut Finn saying “Rey I never told you”
☑ Remove Wexley & Leia scene

Cave scene:

☑ Cut flashlight joke
☑ Remove flashlight from the end of the clip
☑ Add Crackling Saber FX
☑ Remove Poe, Rey & Finn dialog
☑ Remove Ochi dialog
☑ Cut Poe saying “bazillion languages”
☑ Cut C3PO saying “I know exactly where the Wayfinder is”
☑ Insert Serpent teaser clip
☑ Add Luke saying “Reach out, Breathe!”
☑ Cut Rey saying “You would have done the same”

Chewies Death scene:

☑ Remove Rey passing Finn her belongings
☑ Remove Rey saying “I’ll be right behind you”
☑ Overlay dialog Rey saying “It’s ok!”
☑ Remove Kylo ship appearing
☑ Add more tension with Kylos entrance
☑ Remove Rey jumping Kylo Ship
☑ Remove Kylo Completely
☑ Insert Kylo Ship appearing
☑ Remove all Rey & Kylo tug-o-war
☑ Cut close up of Rey saying “Chewie!”
Remove Kylo from the wide shot - Can anyone help?
☑ Insert Kylo clip in ship speeding up
☑ Remove Chewie death fake out

Poe, Finn & Rey plan:
☑ Cut Finn saying “Redactive bypass”
☑ Insert BB8 cutaway

☑ Cut Finn saying “but of this mission fails…”
☑ Cut “Hands” dialog

Kojimi scene:

☑ Cut Finn saying “Spice runner”
☑ Cut back and forth dialog
☑ Add Crackling Saber
☑ Cut Zorii saying “Not that you care”
☑ Cut Rey saying “I care!”
☑ Cut Poe saying “He won’t remember anything”
☑ Cut Finn saying “Doesn’t R2 back up…”
☑ Cut C3PO saying “R2 Unreliable”
☑ Cut Poe saying “How you doing there?”
☑ Cut C3PO saying “At my friends”
☑ Remove Zorri’s hair strands

☑ Change wipe transition to Kylo

☑ Insert Chewies fake-out scene

Kylo Ren Destroyer:

☑ Cut Rey saying “You’re relieved we’re here”
☑ Cut Stormtrooper saying “Welcome guys!”
☑ Cut Finn saying “Reys here”
☑ Cut Finn saying “Ships this way, follow me”
☑ Cut Finn shouting “Poe!”
☑ Cut Poe saying “Hey, Fellas”
☑ Cut Trooper saying “Shut up, Scum!”
☑ Edit weird end scene.

Rey & Kylo force fight scene:

☑ Cut Kylo saying “Where ever you are”
☑ Cut Kylo saying “I pushed you in the desert”
☑ Cut Kylo saying “They sold you to protect you”
☑ Cut Kylo saying “Tell me where you are”
☑ Cut Kylo saying “So, that’s where you are!”
Add dagger to Rey’s hand to fix continuity error - Can anyone help?
☑ Cut Poe & Finn dialog
☑ Cut Hux saying “I’m the spy!”
☑ Remove Rey passing C3PO weapons
☑ Remove Hux saying “Aaaah!”
☑ Remove all Kylo Palpatine dialog

☑ Remove Palpatine talking to Kylo

Deathstar wreckage scene:

☑ Remove Rey saying “it’s a bad place”
☑ Cut the Goonies style dagger scene
☑ Insert Sith Whispers
☑ Cut Jannah saying “Not now, Too dangerous!”
☑ Cut Jannah saying “There’s another skimmer”

Deathstar Scene:

☑ Edit Rey losing grip and worry face.
☑ Insert Sith Whispers
☑ Remove Reys weird head pop upshot
☑ Remove Kylo weird reaction
☑ Cut Wayfinder prop swap
☑ Insert deathstar ridge scene
☑ Remove Finn from deathstar
☑ Remove Finn & Jannah from behind Kylo scene
☑ Add Han Solo shouting “Ben!”
☑ Remove Leias death scene
☑ Add Leia saying “Rey!”
☑ Add more Leia Dialogue
☑ Add Kylo scar healing scene
☑ Cut Falcon picking up Finn & Jannah

☑ Remove Leias bedside scene
☑ Remove Poe & Finn return scene

Kylo & Han scene:

☑ Remove dialog about Leia

Rebel Base scene:

☑ Insert Palpatine’s message from Fortnight
☑ Add city scenes/planets/worlds
☑ Switch Poe and Rose scenes
☑ Remove Poe talking to Leia

Luke Island scene:

☑ Cut Luke saying “A Jedi weapon deserves more respect”
☑ Cut Luke saying “Because you’re a Palpatine?”
☑ Remove “She still trained me”
☑ Insert “She still trained me” after Leia saber
☑ Extend Rey scene to fit with new dialog
☑ Move Luke saying “Last night of her training”
☑ Insert “Any news from Rey?” scene with Wexley
☑ Rearrange scene and cut any mention of the Falcon