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Post #1344041

Author
Knight of Kalee
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Revenge of the Sith (The New Canon Cut) [DRAFT AVAILABLE]
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Date created
11-May-2020, 5:52 PM
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11-May-2020, 5:52 PM
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Knight of Kalee
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The new JAT line might sound a little bit more natural with a shorter span between “Anakin” and “Face up…”, but I agree it’s already pretty good the way it is now.

Personally I could go either way regarding the secret council scene. I feel the silent Yoda ending flows better, but the added line justifies his support for the idea, making Yoda seem more reluctant about it.