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Post #1343938

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NFBisms
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Revenge of the Sith (The New Canon Cut) [DRAFT AVAILABLE]
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Date created
11-May-2020, 2:04 PM
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11-May-2020, 2:05 PM
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NFBisms
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I gave that a shot, as well as maybe removing “Please”
I was always iffy on the JAT line myself, but it didn’t seem to matter to untrained ears which is how it made it this far. And so many choices I’ve made since have worked off of that line in particular working.

sade1212 said:
I didn’t notice last time that you VFX’d Obi-Wan so his saber ignites second; it’s nice and subtly done.

Yeah, I figured that was essential to really shifting everyone’s motivations. I was hoping someone would help me out with it, but I guess it’s fine as it is?