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Post #1343778

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Delpheas
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Info: TROS Edit Opinions Poll - RESULTS & ANALYSIS
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Date created
11-May-2020, 3:08 AM

Absolutely, will refrain from further discussion. I only asked cus it was an editing pattern I was noticing that as snooker said is “yikes” and this seemed the only thread even remotely like a place to bring it up.

RogueLeader said:

Yeah snooker, you had some pretty good plans to set up their feelings for each other throughout. It’s too bad there’s no way to get a kiss in there at the end.

The setup could still be used though, even if there isn’t any explicit payoff. Just cutting the flirting/longing looks with Jannah and the other girl would help a lot imo.