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Post #1343371

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kewlfish
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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
10-May-2020, 3:19 AM

DominicCobb said:

I think the crawls tend to be in the low 80s actually so yours is definitely on the wordy side.

You would be correct, it appears only the Force Awakens has word count even close, which is 88. Hmm, perhaps this is better. It cuts it down to 86 words

EPISODE IX
THE RISE OF SKYWALKER
After Jedi Master Luke Skywalker’s valiant last stand at the BATTLE OF CRAIT, the spark of hope lives on. To suppress the growing uprising, the diabolical FIRST ORDER silences all communication between neighboring systems.

To unite the desperate worlds, the RESISTANCE dispatches agents across the galaxy while Rey, the last of the Jedi, continues her training under General Leia Organa.

Meanwhile, a disturbance in the FORCE has led Supreme Leader Kylo Ren to MUSTAFAR in search of a Sith artifact…