I saw that user Krausfadr moved the Finn and Poe play chess with Chewie scene to the end of the movie when Rey lands on Tattooine to establish that she didn’t go alone. Not sure about the etiquette of using someone else’s edit, but I thought it was a fantastic addition that would fit well with your falcon take-off final shot.

Also, what are your thoughts on changing the title to Duel of the Fates, as in the Treverrow version? It could make using the music track in the duel even more effective.

If it were possible, would you consider adding Ben Solo as a ghost in the final scene? Alternatively, I’ve seen some speculate that due to the nature of the force dyad, Ben and Rey’s spirits are now one inside of her. Is this be something you would be interested in subtly implying? Perhaps by mixing in some of the hopeful parts of ‘Torn Apart’.

Sign me up to the list of “make Finn and Poe more gay”. I saw someone suggest using Poe’s sex eyes towards Zorii with a shot of Finn, has anyone seriously tried this? Perhaps even using a behind the scenes shot if there is an appropriate one. If it works, it could even add subtext to the chess scene at the end of the movie I mentioned earlier.

Might I suggest as well in the finale cutting the “Rey who?” question. I know it’s setup in Pasaana but it’s a very weird question to ask a random stranger. I would suggest:

“Who are you?”
“I’m Rey…”
look at force ghosts
“…Rey Skywalker”

Anyway, very much looking forward to seeing this. All of your clips so far seem top notch.