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Post #1342731

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Delpheas
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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
8-May-2020, 5:35 PM

specialk2121 said:

Hal 9000 said:

To move crawl discussion for this project into its own thread, here’s my current draft. Could stand some tweaking yet.

Episode IX
THE RISE OF SKYWALKER
Across the galaxy, the spark of hope lives on. To suffocate a growing uprising, the tyrannical First Order has silenced communication between neighboring systems.

Attempting to unite the disparate rebelling worlds, General Leia Organa dispatches her brave agents across the stars to fan the flame of Resistance.

Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren has traveled to Mustafar in search of a rumored Imperial fleet that would allow him to destroy any threat to his power…

Maybe instead of “suffocate” you go with “extinguish”. Unless that’s beating the spark motif to death

You can suffocate a flame too, so it doesn’t seem like an issue to me.

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I really love making it about the fleet rather than Palpatine. Brings me back to Dark Force Rising and goes a long way to make the Dark Empire reveal an actual surprise.