Jonh, I’m removing the line “I am all the Jedi” from my edit. I hate that line, but others might like it so it might be best not to cut anything. But if you choose to remove it based on the presence of the Jedi behind her, I think it works.
Post #1342627
- Author
- krausfadr
- Parent topic
- Star Wars: The Rise Of Skywalker Redux Ideas thread
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1342627/action/topic#1342627
- Date created
- 8-May-2020, 12:37 PM