Honestly, even as somebody who enjoys a big chunk of the movie, I HATE the ‘I am all the jedi’ line. I think that the sentiment behind it works, but it just sounds so clunky. I’d personally at least try to remove at least ‘all the’, so that it’s just ‘I… am… Jedi’, but failing that I’d find a way to remove it entirely.
Post #1342567
- Author
- omnimuffin
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- Star Wars: The Rise Of Skywalker Redux Ideas thread
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- Date created
- 8-May-2020, 10:00 AM