I don’t see what was wrong with the way I worded that particular sentence haha.
Nothing. I think it works not to use an analogy, but DOTF’s “suffocate” could juxtapose nicely with the “spark.”
Post #1342076
- Author
- Hal 9000
- Parent topic
- Dom's (Possibly) Useful TROS Edit (WIP)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1342076/action/topic#1342076
- Date created
- 7-May-2020, 5:33 AM