This edit helps cement the idea that these people are a family now, instead of Rey being completely alone on a desert planet at the end. Her friends are there waiting for her : )
It also helps explain why BB-8 is there, he’s just a curious little friend : )
I like how you can still hear Poe, Finn and Chewie still arguing as Rey leaves the Falcon. This is great…well done.
It is wonderful, though perhaps the sounds of arguing should stop before the wide shot of the Falcon.
For this idea, would you be keeping the very end of this scene in the beginning of the film? You might be able to re-use the shot of Chewie looking intently at the game board, then the sound of the proximity indicator, ‘We won’t turn it off’, and run the rest of the scene from there to establish the ‘cheating’ joke in reverse.