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Post #1341988

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littlev87
Parent topic
Dom's (Possibly) Useful TROS Edit (WIP)
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Date created
6-May-2020, 11:21 PM

Hal 9000 said:

Good revision. I feel the need to try to modify the clause about the rising tide of dissidence, maybe an analogy that doesn’t seem at odds with that of a spark. Not sure about ‘fabled’ either. I guess it’s time to bust out a thesaurus and get into the weeds.

“to quell the whispers of rebellion”