Nice new crawl. Here’s my current draft for mine taking some of it into account:

Episode IX
THE RISE OF SKYWALKER

Across the galaxy, the spark of hope lives on. To quell an uprising, the tyrannical First Order has silenced communication between neighboring systems.

As Rey, sole heir to the Jedi, continues her training under the ailing General Leia Organa, their fledging Resistance gathers intel to forge a path to freedom.

Meanwhile, Supreme Leader Kylo Ren has traveled to Mustafar in search of a legendary Imperial fleet that would allow him to destroy any threat to his power…