The change to “he” to “I” is seamless, well done. Not a critique of your version, but I would like to see a version of that scene without her saying she’ll find and destroy Palpatine, since I think it would work better if Finn’s reply was solely a response to the fact that she killed her parents.
Post #1341741
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- RogueLeader
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- Date created
- 6-May-2020, 3:10 PM