Nah, it still sounds too chopped-up as it is…wish I was more skilled with audio stuff. I think just EQ-ing the different “patches” to blend a little better is the key - as it is, it sounds like a couple snippets have much more bass to them.

Maybe even processing it more - compress the dynamic range so the pieces all feel like they’re at the same volume/intensity, then run it through whatever filters to give it the “mask modulated” sound?

Again, don’t know a ton about audio work, this is just me spitballing stuff that might be nonsense words.