Here’s an update to the ending bits I’ve been playing with. Maybe these can work individually or be inspiration for other ideas.
https://vimeo.com/414395138
pw: faneditI further tweaked the “just Rey” line, and added a more pronounced “t”.
I also added an updated version of the new end shot I’ve been messing with, which removes Rey and BB-8, instead having the falcon fly off into the binary sunset.
Wow!
Never been a huge advocate for a Ben force ghost, but the “Just Rey” line is perfect and the falcon is getting much better! I honestly had a huge smile on my face when it jumped to hyperspace! 😄
I do however, strongly believe that you should experiment with having the falcon just be a silhouette to hide the imperfections of the model. I would also suggest fattening it a little and toning down the blueness of the engine. Just my thoughts, you don’t have to try all those things! 😃
Edit:
Do you realise Poppa, that you may have potentially converted a scene that I consider to be the worst of any Star Wars film into one that I can somewhat tolerate! 😂