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Post #1341074

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stevepaynter
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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
5-May-2020, 7:50 AM

Hal 9000 said:

Yeah, I guess a title change would be in order in that event. I’ll have to think about that. I like the clip a great deal with the Falcon; I could still use that even if I didn’t change the line.

I think what’s missing to sell that line is a specific mention elsewhere of the name “Rey Palptine.”

This.

The “Just Rey” has no context if the Rey is a nobody and there is no Rey Palpatine. For Rey Nobody edits it would be best to cut out the line “Rey who?” from the old lady.