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OutboundFlight
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Revenge of the Sith: Refocused - a Clone Wars: Refocused Companion Edit (v3.03 Available now)
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5-May-2020, 12:00 AM

Delpheas said:

Four hours is a long time, I might check it out to see what’s been done, but in addition to the runtime, I can’t really see myself enjoying it as long as it uses a plain extended RotS. Anakin’s gonna feel all over the place in terms of characterisation.


Anyway, here’s the promised clips. I’ll update the main post later.

Pass for all: fanedit

Opening with new crawl, temp music replacement for narrator lines
https://vimeo.com/414966830

You can see the first “Day” title card. Five will appear throughout.

“You’ve done well Anakin” (gotta figure out what to do about Palps talking standing up)
https://vimeo.com/414993033

I want Anakin to treat killing Dooku the way he treats all the casual murders he commits in TCW, it’s just a thing he did, and he moves on.

Ahsoka fights on Mandalore while Anakin is Late
https://vimeo.com/414994185

“What have I done?”
https://vimeo.com/414993081

Trying out not seeing Anakin see “What have I done”, only Ahsoka hearing Lanter’s Anakin say it. Also trying Palpatine and Ahsoka saying “anakin” at the same time.

Labyrinth of Evil Ending with Ahsoka & Vader: (taking suggestions on rescoring the Luke hand off to flow better with the Vader finale.)
https://vimeo.com/414975128

My goal with this one is an actually Dark ending, there’s definitely hope, but that’s not this story.

These are all first or second passes, so keep that in mind.

Alright, first off, amazing work at completing this so quickly!

I have a few suggestions for the Labyrinth of Evil ending. First, while I think Threepio and R2 is a solid scene in ROTS, I think it’s too much humor especially when it cuts to Ahsoka and Rex burying the clones. I would try rescoring the entire scene (Yoda, Leia, and Luke’s) to this: https://youtu.be/MJrEkTEkE4Q it’s the music from the last Ahsoka scene. It captures the tradegy far better than Binary Sunset. And it would since it’s the music from the scene before, it will perfectly mix into the final scene with Vader.