I really love what you’ve done for the balcony scene banter. And I really like “stand up for himself and not be pushed around.”

The talk of pitching up Hayden’s added lines, and hearing Matt deliver one of the TE lines, has me really interested in hearing the whole movie with Hayden consistently pitched down.

As for “you weren’t there”, I think it is a much better line than “don’t lecture me Obi-wan” and given the context of TCW Anakin, it does flow seamlessly, the theatrical line is bad and feels out of place.

I love what you’re doing for Anakin’s Fall, decisive TCW Anakin absolutely would kill Mace and only regret it after he fully relises what that means. And I think it is absolutely cool not to include “What have I done”. Because Clone Wars had Matt say that line, Ahsoka hearing it could easily be seen as a result of their bond. And that’s how Fall of the Republic is gonna play it.

“Obi-Wan wants to Help”
Yes, please do that. It’s great and it makes it hurt even more.

“Friend’s Farewell”
This is great and heartbreaking. The music really helps sell that Obi-Wan is trying so hard to remain optimistic and cheerful around Anakin, and that he’s trying to reinforce who he knows Anakin to be. One of my favorite moments so far.

Kashyyyk.
I think the wookie subs work, and are necessary for the standalone version of RotS. It will be less of an issue in FotR since it will be the second time Kashyyyk appears and I have Ahsoka landing her troops happen right before this Kashyyyk scene.

I do think the audio is unnecessarily loud, but it is a battle scene and those almost always are.

Mace/Windu/Yoda:
I think you’re right, the scene is necessary. The version that is in the current export doesn’t feel too short imo, and does a lot to setup Obi-Wan’s concerns.