I keep playing with a “T” sound and I keep changing it! Sometimes it sounds smoother to me without it, but then it feels missing. I’ll keep playing, and post something for others to use when I feel good about. I can move this to the other TROS thread because I don’t think it’s something for this edit.
I think that seeing that this is like, the last line in Star Wars to be spoken, ever… It would really need to be nailed to convince people.
At the moment I think it’s really well done! Only thing for me that is holding it back is like many have said, the missing ‘t’ sound.