I was going to mention that but I’m glad you noticed!

If you don’t mind, I’d like to make too small suggestions. In the second paragraph of the crawl, you mention “underworld organisations”. Do you think you could possibly change “organisations” to a different word? Americans spell it like, “organizations”, so it might stick out and feel odd for the some viewers across the pond. Maybe you could go with “underworld syndicates”?

Also, if you don’t mind me throwing out an alternate episode title, I wonder if something like Ashes of the Empire might be more appropriate for the overall feel of this first story. Yes, the Child definitely seems like a Vergence in the Force, but I don’t think anyone even uses the word “Force” in the show, and the story so far has less to do with the Force, and more to do with these various people surviving in the aftermath of the Empire’s collapse. The Vergence title might be more appropriate if the show gets into more Force lore in the next season or two, and our heroes actually get introduced to the concept of the Force. Supposedly the original title for Episode 7 was actually Shadow of the Empire, so that could work too.