Yay! I’m glad you took my suggestion regarding the “Obi-Wan’s been here” scene. Haven’t watched the new version yet, but it seems to be playing well with the other previewers.
“Sense a plot”
I will agree with not cutting the rest of the Holocouncil, in fact because it is in Clone Wars I think is even more reason to keep it.
Rogue Leader’s suggestions for handling Mustafar and the Yoda/Mace/Kenobi scene are solid.
Based on the clips, I really like the Palpatine reveal. It’s solid.
Grevious expecting Skywalker is still really good.
I really really like “Anakin is the father isn’t he?” arrangement.
The suggestion earlier in this thread to have Obi-Wan say “I saw a security recording of him killing Jedi” is actually a really good one. It would help sell that Padme is considering the idea that Anakin is … gone.
No matter what, you absolutely have to keep Padme standing up to Anakin. It is vital. As is the reworking of the pre-fight dialogue.
Anyway, looking forward to the final version. This is my fave version of RotS to date. Great job.
P.s. I’m not a he 😉