Absolutely love the work you’ve done so far! I’d echo the suggestions re: Kashyyyk-Anidala and Obi-Wan’s reaction. The volume of the battle is a little too loud in contrast with the baby-lightsaber talk. I’d personally suggest raising the volume of Anakin and Padme a little. The screams during Obi’s reaction are a little distracting - it was hard for me to really internalize his actual reaction, so I would suggest removing some of them.
(Also, how would I see a workprint/latest version? New to the forums so I’m not familiar with everything yet, lol)