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Post #1340042

Author
KananJarrusJediKnight
Parent topic
Revenge of the Sith (The New Canon Cut) [DRAFT AVAILABLE]
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Date created
2-May-2020, 10:29 PM
Last modified
2-May-2020, 10:30 PM
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KananJarrusJediKnight
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Absolutely love the work you’ve done so far! I’d echo the suggestions re: Kashyyyk-Anidala and Obi-Wan’s reaction. The volume of the battle is a little too loud in contrast with the baby-lightsaber talk. I’d personally suggest raising the volume of Anakin and Padme a little. The screams during Obi’s reaction are a little distracting - it was hard for me to really internalize his actual reaction, so I would suggest removing some of them.

(Also, how would I see a workprint/latest version? New to the forums so I’m not familiar with everything yet, lol)