Digging most of the changes, I think some of the laughing and giggling between shots might be a little bit over-kill, so I think toning it down a bit would make it flow better, I also think some of the extra lines for Anakin feel a little out of place and kinda brake the flow of the scene, like when Anakin calmly says “I won’t lose you” just after choking his wife.
Other-wise great job.
Post #1339996
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- idir_hh
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- Revenge of the Sith (The New Canon Cut) [ON HOLD INDEFINITELY]
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- 2-May-2020, 7:11 PM