I like most of your changes. The 'General Skywalker’s are particularly excellent, as are the added Ewan noises when he sees the hologram. A few of the audio additions (esp. Padme’s balcony) feel a little crowded in but such is the nature of these things. Will you be releasing your edit with a 5.1 audio track so I can steal your audio changes more easily, or just stereo like the earlier verson?
Oh, and I can’t work out what Anakin says at the start of palpatinereveal.mp4.
Anakin makes the force choke sound with his mouth by taking a big gulp of air in preduel.mp4