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Post #1339574

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jarbear
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Star Wars: The Rise Of Skywalker Redux Ideas thread
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Date created
1-May-2020, 11:04 AM

Jonh, watched your latest videos. The first one is pretty much perfect, I can’t critique it in any way. I like it a lot. I really enjoyed the touch of aging Anakin a bit. It is subtle, not glaring, which helps sell things nicely without being “too much” if that makes any sense.

For the second video, It is going in a very, very nice direction. The Obi-Wan and Yoda part is fantastic, couldn’t find any touch ups needed unless someone spots something. I also appreciate the more “softer” shield. Although my choice would be to give Rey a slight glow or something other than the shield, the more subtle shield is much better than your first draft.

Anakin and Luke is looking good too. If possible, if it isn’t too much to do I would also suggest if someone could mimic his outfit as shown in ROTJ to fit more in that. Now with what you did with Anakin in this, I would be up for someone to age Hayden/Anakin in that movie in connection with this. It would really tie in things nicely. But that is an idea for another project!

All in all. This is fantastic and I am digging it. I think the main area to work on is touching up Anakin and Luke with proportions and then possibly changing Anakin’s Wardrobe IF it is feasible to do. A side note myself would be trying an alternate without the shield but more of a glow. But that is more of a personal choice on that one.

Keep it up! This is great!