Ok, here’s a version without the lightning scars and scaled down a bit! Still need to tweak the track a little.
Palpatine Clones - Clear
PW: fanedit
Wow, that was fast! Definitely an improvemt! It looks fantastic! Just out of curiousity, why did you choose to change the fluid to red rather than the yellowy green?
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Can I just go on record as saying that my god, Poppasketti, you certainly do not get enough credit! You are honestly one of the most talented VFX people I know!