do you use for your edit “making of” and “behind the scenes” parts too?
Is there any specific shots or clips that would be workable?
If I may, I would recommend your alternate Shaak-Ti clip with the extra space battle shot before the scene. This way, nothing needs to be cut, and it follows the original script better.
I don’t know if the clip works, the camera work isn’t quite like anything in the film, and is a bit short. I’d like it if it was a bit longer but currently its not going to work, sorry.
Here’s the probably the final cut of the Shaak Ti scene, I’m happy with it unless anyone else has some suggestions on what else to do with it
I think you should cut to Grievous after the shot of the battle droids falling to the ground, not before. As of now, it’s kind of an abrupt scene transition. I also agree with everyone else that the graphics on the console showing them running through a hallway need to be replaced with new graphics showing them in the hangar if you’re going to stick to this sequence.
Also did you get my PM by any chance?
I know you said that the clip wouldn’t work but I went ahead and made an example of it just to show you what I meant. >The camera work is actually quite similar to the intro of the movie, but I know what you mean that it might not fit.
https://youtu.be/AKYW9SBfUUI
I’m actually surprised at how well that works, although the cut out of the footage feels a little abrupt with the camera movement.