Looking good Bobson, glad you’re back!
The clip works well in my opinion! Only problem I can see is that the alien says: “Two jedi have landed in the main hanger bay, we’re tracking them.” aren’t they still cutting down the droids at this point? Why do they need to be tracked through the ship if they aren’t running around like the hologram suggests?
On another note, how are your other projects going? I’m super hyped to see your Luke force ghost scene as well!