I quite like most of your list. There are still some things I personally wouldn’t cut in order to be fully consistent with The Clone Wars and I absolutely wouldn’t cut the wedding.

There is an edit out there that had Anakin and Padme go back to Naboo and get married, had Anakin’s nightmare about his mother and the scene where he decides to go to Tatooine, and then ended the film on Tatooine like you are suggesting.

I have an edited version of Hal’s where I added Padme asleep in the bed next to Anakin after his nightmare, using zoomed in footage from RotS. What I might suggest is that after Geonosis is taken care of, we cut to the wedding, and then to another nightmare about his mother, Padme and Anakin in bed, he gets up and rushes off to Tatooine, and then it proceeds from there.

Personally I also like the idea of ending on the funeral.

I know that adds a lot of planet hoping to the end of the film, but I think it could work rather well.

I’d love to see a workprint, especially if you still have a version that is more NCC than “Popcorn”.