I don’t really think it’s necessary to have the pregnancy be known prior to the film, regardless of that scene. I easily believe Anakin looking at her face from the front just didn’t notice her belly. And the fact that they don’t know about the twins has always been weird, but I don’t really know if I’m interested in fixing that here. Maybe she just didn’t want to know, or maybe there’s no way to check without compromising the secret, idk. It’s not really in the goals of the edit, more effort than it’s worth, personally.
I would be interested in seeing the proofs of concept, though.
I actually toyed with Anakin saying “Kill me” but I decided against that or “save me.” Subtlety is good and Hayden shines when it comes to his face alone.
I won’t be using Hal’s alt ending since I’m not super convinced by it. It should be pretty easy to insert oneself though.