Thanks!
RogueLeader said:
I actually think “your padawan” fits less now, in comparison. Was that the best version of “padawan” you could find?
I’m guessing you may have already tried to have him say “Ahsoka”? I wonder if it would fit better, because of course we know who Ahsoka is, but it might feel weird for Obi-Wan to refer to Ahsoka as his padawan, because a hypothetical non-Clone Wars watcher might be like “wait, Anakin has a padawan?”
Plus, is she still technically his padawan? But people wouldn’t necessarily question it if he just said “Ahsoka”.
pfft plebs don’t even know about Jedi Master Yorp Adywan?
I toyed with a “your captain” I found from TCW, but that really didn’t work. And “Ahsoka” from JAT never sounds like Ewan, much less Ewan in this particular scene.
But Ewan says “padawan” like 3 times in Attack of the Clones, and that’s it for the trilogy. xP
So I’m stuck with that one instance of it, but I think I found a way to make it work?
Here’s another go at it: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1rQ55sV6qLhA49hMVySz_NtvKiMWXtths/view?usp=sharing
(ignore the masking fuck-up towards the end, it’s a side effect of me extending a shot, I’ve fixed it in my editor)