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Post #1335561

Author
CarterStarkiller
Parent topic
Dom's (Possibly) Useful TROS Edit (WIP)
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https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1335561/action/topic#1335561
Date created
15-Apr-2020, 4:28 AM

Everything here is looking and sounding great but there are a couple things that has bothered me in the film which I think can be fixed/changed that hasn’t been mentioned.

  1. The moment when ailing General Leia walks away and Maz Kanata tells R2 “Leia knows what must be done R2…”
    Everyone reacting to Leia just stands looking at her. I suggest adding a couple “General?” or “General Organa?”s to the audio track so it doesn’t seem so awkward. Also changing R2’s beeps from sad to more neutral as it doesn’t make sense that R2 would be sad just from Leia walking away. It would also make Maz’s line a little less clunky.

  2. Has someone thought of rescoring Yoda’s theme out of the victory celebration? While I love John Williams’ score this was the one cue that really confused me.

  3. The final line of the film
    I’ve disliked the “Rey Skywalker” line since my first viewing of the film. Because Lando’s “Well let’s find out.” is being cut, C-3PO’s “Did you hear that?” should be the final line due to the call back of the first line of A New Hope and also the final line of Revenge of the Sith (“Oh no.”). I’ve done a very rough (and I mean VERY rough) edit of taking the old woman out of the epilogue and it makes Rey taking the name of Skywalker more implied which I prefer.

Keep up the gook work to everyone involved and I cannot wait to see more of the great progress of this fanedit!