Revised first half of Ahch-to:
https://vimeo.com/407441816

Please keep in mind, as always, this is a rough mockup, just to give you guys a sense of what I’m doing.

spoilers

Added new establishing shot

Extended nearly every shot pre-Luke, to varying degrees

Drastically reduced Luke’s blueness

Reinserted original establishing shot to break up the two scenes

Cut out mention of Rey Palpatine

Added Luke walking in front of Rey (weird edit, but they do the same thing in the theatrical)

Closed Rey’s mouth for one of the shots (if anyone wants to take a crack at doing this better than me, be my guest)