Rey’s vision feels absolutely perfect, better than the original for sure.
I agree with Hal that if there’s a way to use Luke for haunting purposes, perhaps the closeup of his face in his duel with Kylo, that would be ideal.
You could probably flash cut from Luke in close-up smirking at him, straight to the “Evil Luke” false-vision (since it’s the version Kylo legit believes in) to replace some of the Rey shots, and further you could shorten up the “touching hands” shot to jump cut to Luke screaming “NO” (edit: he screams STOP actually)
Heck, you could probably go straight from
Touching hands - Luke “NO” - Kylo (after Luke disappears) “NO”
bang-bang-bang quick cuts. Just long enough for viewers to recognize what the shots are, but not long enough for them to play out. I think that’s why the Rey vision works as well as it does, is the cuts are timed PERFECTLY to let viewers recognize what’s being referenced but they stop the second that synapse fires. That’s tough to do, and you nailed it Dom.