I edited the healing and kiss scene so that Leia gives Ben her life force to heal Rey, meaning that Ben lives. I added the voices of Leia, Luke, Han and Anakin so that the scene would still have an emotional impact.
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I enjoyed this - your idea conveys well that the other Jedi are helping Ben. I’d be tempted to cut Han though, and focus more on Leia, as Han is a) not a force ghost and b) already prominently featured in Ben’s return to the light.