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Post #1333763

Author
adobewan
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The Last Jedi - 'The End' Edition' (V1 NOW COMPLETE!) (Released)
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Date created
7-Apr-2020, 3:10 AM

I have recently completed a fan edit of The Last Jedi that seeks to make the film work as a conclusion to the Skywalker saga. My goal is to make VERY MINIMAL changes to most of TLJ, using HAL9000’s LEGENDARY edition of the film as a base. My edit seeks to strengthen the sense of finality in the film.

My changes are as follows:

  • Removed reference to Knights of Ren as Luke’s old students. It can now be inferred that they are Snoke’s guards
  • Added Leia training with Luke as a flashback, as per rocknroll41’s suggestion. This uses Leia’s purple saber by skenera
  • Removed all references to Kylo being named Supreme Leader
  • Removed Luke’s “the war is just beginning” and Kylo’s previous statement about it being over
  • Removed Kylo’s threat of “destroying all of it” and Luke’s follow-up.
  • Removed the First Order storming the base. The last we see of Kylo is him screaming in defeat
  • Removed Rey meeting Poe Dameron. Just feels like setup
  • Removed Rey and Leia’s lines about “rebuilding the Rebellion”
  • Added both the Star Destroyer montage and Rey at the Skywalker home from TROS
  • Removed Leia’s ghost from the end of TROS

I believe my current work looks promising. I’d love any input on this and please add any other suggestions. Thank you

The link to the ending concept follows below.
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1gz4M1XZl8IBuOGLyiGuCMYEwXgdil4z0

UPDATE: V1 is now complete! PM for details.

This isn’t an earth shattering reinterpretation of the film but I believe it provides enough closure for the saga that viewers new and old alike should be satisfied (given they liked TLJ as a film). Once again, HAL9000’s brilliant fanedit is what I worked off and improvements to the film overall are due to him.

V2 will likely be more ambitious and I am always open to new suggestions.