Sign In

Post #1330901

Author
idir_hh
Parent topic
Episode IX: A New Order
Link to post in topic
https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1330901/action/topic#1330901
Date created
24-Mar-2020, 10:33 AM

Really like the use of flashbacks but it would be better to use them sparingly in the scene.
I think instead of blowing up Ochi’s ship she would have electrocuted it, causing it to crash.
This could be illustrated with bolts of lightning circulating the ship ala Palpatine and the fleet - to imply the ship falling down, you could cut to black and use crash land SFX.