Really like the use of flashbacks but it would be better to use them sparingly in the scene.
I think instead of blowing up Ochi’s ship she would have electrocuted it, causing it to crash.
This could be illustrated with bolts of lightning circulating the ship ala Palpatine and the fleet - to imply the ship falling down, you could cut to black and use crash land SFX.
Post #1330901
- Author
- idir_hh
- Parent topic
- Episode IX: A New Order (Alpha version released)
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- Date created
- 24-Mar-2020, 10:33 AM