I don’t know if I can create ex nihilo a new establishing shot after the crawl. So I’ll have to start the movie with Kylo going to Mustafar.

Here’s my crawl. Please, if anyone tells me what he thinks about it, it’ll be appreciated.

*The spark of rebellion has engulfed the First Order.
SUPREME LEADER Kylo Ren, wanting to rule over a new Empire,
searches the source of the Sith power that Snoke mastered.

Although her son’s assault has taken a toll on her,
General Leia Organa teaches the young girl REY the ways of the Jedi,
hoping to help her commune with the long gone knights.

As Poe Dameron and Finn struggle to find the truth about a
possible spy among the ranks of the First Order, Kylo Ren
travels to Mustafar to find an ancient device that could lead him to
his master’s mysterious home planet.*