I do agree, but maybe reduce Finn screaming her name a lot.
That’s exactly what I would do. Have him do the first scream, get pushed back, and then cut after Jana says her line but before his second scream.
I do agree, but maybe reduce Finn screaming her name a lot.
That’s exactly what I would do. Have him do the first scream, get pushed back, and then cut after Jana says her line but before his second scream.