Not really trying to start a discussion on the ideas behind those lines, but I wonder if you cut out Rey’s “And I…” dramatic pause might help improve the moment a little.
Post #1329939
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- RogueLeader
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- Date created
- 19-Mar-2020, 2:15 PM