Okay, so here’s my first contribution to this edit:
As per Hal’s request to me, I have replaced 3PO’s silly “Whoever this Chewie fellow is…” line with a more fresh out of the box thing for him to say:
In this version 3PO says a line taken from one of the cartoon animations:
“And I will be your protocal droid!”
Looks really good…well done.
PS…Are you still working on changing the “No Parking on the Beach” scene in TLJ?