Hey there Darth Sadifous. The dialogue should be improved. If you have any specific ideas please share. Here’s a possible fix (note I’m removing all dialogue about Palpatine from Poe’s intel briefing scene):
Boolio: Someone has been hiding in the Unknown Regions.
Finn: Who?
Boolio: Don’t know. The First Order is searching for a planet there.
Finn: How do we thank you?
Boolio: End the war.