Here’s Boolio’s new dialogue which will be in Bocce with English subtitles:
Boolio: “The First Order’s super weapon— someone gave it to them.”
(Ha Wun Orr Da olanda reapon - Koo-dopi hokokeez yolats?)Finn: “Who?”
Boolio: “I don’t know but it only fires once.” (Donnoj. Fooma wuntimax)
Finn: “How do we thank you?”
Boolio: “Shoot the Supreme Leader. Twice please.” (Zooto meesta fazkup. Dola bleeze. )
I like your change ideas, definitely helps follow up Kylo’s trajectory after The Last Jedi. However, I think this new dialogue exchange needs work. It sounds a little clunky like the prequels in my opinion. I look forward to seeing the final product. Let me know if I may be able to help. May the force be with you!